I penned this many moons ago. I love a thunder storm (provided I'm indoors). And, it was a thunder storm that give me the idea for the short story.
The riverbed raised its sleepy head — another day had dawned — and she wondered what it might bring. The sky was the first to know, as candy floss-coloured clouds began to darken and the rumble of thunder announced its presence. The trees whispered excitedly to the grass: a storm was about to break. In turn, the grass passed the message to the river.
The river eagerly waited for the thrill of the race to come. Then she would be off, and the chase would begin. She remembered the last storm: first, the lightning, crackling zig-zag patterns across dark skies. Thunder followed — angry and forceful — trying to catch her as she danced gracefully ahead, with intense winds attempting to slow her down. Nothing could beat her. She would never yield. Victory would always be hers to take.
It happened in that split second. The branches of the trees swayed from side to side, announcing their allegiance to the river, blocking the powerful wind momentarily. The leaves shouted their encouragement, urging the river to take the lead. The rain lashed the riverbanks, soaking the grass in retaliation for the river’s refusal to give in. She drove herself unmercifully for what seemed like an eternity — never tiring, refusing to submit.
Then the storm broke — giving up, surrendering the battle — tired, weary, and angry that the river would take the glory once more. The sun made an appearance, smiling in satisfaction. The trees congratulated the river, and the grass saluted their hero.
The day became peaceful once more. The river slept — contented, proud, and ready.
© Jan Hope 2025
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